INT. JANET’S APARTMENT – NIGHT
And then the doorbell rings.
JANET
Who is it?
DR. JAMISON (O.S)
It’s the Doc!
Janet hangs up , rips the door open. She’s so happy to see him, the only word that comes to mind is:
JANET
Yes!
DR. JAMISON
Janet, honey, I’m sorry I’m late.
I couldn’t get to the phone. Then
your number was busy and… I
hate the phone anyway…
JANET
I love you. I missed you.
DR. JAMISON
I’ll tell you why I was late.
JANET
I don’t care! Let’s go. Let’s
get out of here.
DR. JAMISON
Well, it has a slight impact on
our plans.
JANET
Like what —
Slowly, she releases him.
DR. JAMISON
I guess I wanted to tell you this
before we flung ourselves into
something major…
JANET
Don’t…not on the porch.
She pulls him inside, and he goes to sit at the furthest possible chair in her small apartment.
DR. JAMISON
I’ve been trying to figure out
how to say this…
And we:
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SAME SHOT
except now he’s wearing a clown suit and reindeer antlers.
DR. JAMISON
…and I don’t want to sit here
and say all those those cliched things
like ‘I need room’ or ‘I’m not
used to someone liking me so
much’…
ON JANET
listening. Concentrating.
BACK TO DR. JAMISON
who is now drenched in mud.
DR. JAMISON
…but I do need some room and I’m
not used to someone liking me so
much…I’m just being honest
here…
ON JANET
who remains stoic. An inner wall rises, a coldness takes over her stare. We hear BLUES GUITAR as we —
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EXTREME CLOSE ANGLE ON A FINGER
tracing down the names under the “J” listing in Janet’s filofax. She reaches Jamison’s entry, and then produces a bottle of Liquid Paper. She dips the brush…and in strong, deliberate, even strokes she obliterates all sign of him. To white